[TheBillFan543]

Will started to walk away.
"Wait, Will!" Honey shouted. He turned back.
"Yeah?"
"I was wondering...well...y'know, tonight, if you want..." Honey muttered.
"I'll pick you up at 7." Will said with a smile and walked off.

Leon and Millie were sitting at a desk, each scanning through thick jewelerry catalouges, trying to find this mysterious watch. None of them had loads of tiny diamonds or anything matching that description on. The two were bored and close to giving up, but they knew they couldn't- Will and Honey wanted this case so bad. The two decided to hit the jewelery stores.

"Leon, there are millions of stores in Sun Hill! He might not have even got it from round here!" Millie complained.
Leon was too busy staring at a nearby man's wrist. Then he looked at the watches discription and went up to the man.
"Excuse me, Sir but can I ask where you got your watch from?" Leon asked.
"Umm... a lil shop in Nottinghill. Why choo ask?" The man demanded.
"Well, a man was assaulted and he discribed his attacker wearing a watch like yours and we were wondering where you got it from." Millie suddenly butted in.
"Yeah, could we just have your name, sir?" Leon asked, notebook and pen already out.
"Ok, Dwaine Williams. I've gotta go, mate. Sorry." Dwaine said, walking off.
Both officers were too shocked to reply.


"Honey, I don't think it's just a coincidence. They have similar watches and the same surname. Any previous?" Will was figuring things out in his head.
"Yeah, three charges of assualt and drink driving. Should we talk to him anymore?"
"Nah, too early. Should we just bring in the laptop to St. Hugh's see if Darren recognises him?" Will suggested.
"Yeah, what you waiting for?"

(Don't worry, you didn't mess it up! You improved it! =] Just wondering, could I use this storyline in a FanFic on a different site?)
(And again, I wrote loads. Sorry! :rolleyes: )

This post has been edited by TheBillFan543: 14 October 2009 - 08:12 AM

[Woody]

With a laptop in tow, the PCs went to the hospital.
'Okay sir, we're just gonna show you some photos. Can you tell us if you recognise any of them?'
He nodded.
After skipping through 20 or so pictures, there was a slight pause before the shaken head. They weren't sure if it meant anything though, because half a minute later, he began to doze off.



(my brain is frazzled at the mo - write as much as you want :) and of course you can use the storyline!)

[TheBillFan543]

"There was a slight pause? Who's picture?" Smithy asked the two when they returned.
"Dwaine Williams, though he did pause on one or two others. Though I don't think it was coincidence..." Honet reported back.
"Ok, get down to Mr Williams' house and question him, don't get too heavy on him though." Smithy dismissed the two.

"Mr Williams?" Will asked the familiar looking man who answered the door.
"Yeah?"
"PCs Fletcher and Harman. Could we have a word?" Honey asked.
"Sure, come in, sit down." The man stepped to one side to let the officers through.

[Woody]

OOC:
Ok... I'm really stuck on what to write for this fic now =(
Sorry - I've spent ages trying to figure it all out, but nothing comes to mind =/